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NOW I KNOW WHO KILLED ME

Post  silence on Thu Oct 27, 2011 6:14 am

The concrete is cold...
Not as cold as the still, stagnate air.
There is no sound but the clink of chains,
and hope crumbling into despair.

There is no light beneath the strap.
Lie still, don't make it tighten more.
The bones ache in silent protest,
against the unrelenting floor.

When will he come to feed upon me?
The monster from my killers bed.
She let him in and closed her eyes,
and never looked upon the red.

I feel the pressure bearing down,
the pain that spears me to my soul.
I feel the tears, the cracks within me.
Know I can never be a whole.

I feel the death setting in.
A kind of death that lives in me.
Opened my eyes and saw her face,
and now I know who killed me.

Not the one who held the blade,
hurt me so bad I could not see,
but the one who looked away.
You're the one who killed me.
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Re: NOW I KNOW WHO KILLED ME

Post  SoulKnife on Thu Dec 01, 2011 1:26 am

I like this one a lot :) The first three stanzas are my favorite.
It's been a while since I've read some of your poetry. Thank you!
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Re: NOW I KNOW WHO KILLED ME

Post  silence on Thu Dec 01, 2011 10:25 pm

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it Smile
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